I am working on Chapters Four, Five and Six, and I have just a few questions.
How do you create sensitive and emotional characters without making them whiners? A LOT of readers really don’t like whiners.
How do you make characters intelligent and perceptive without treating the readers like they’re idiots? Readers hate to be treated like they’re stupid.
How do you make a character struggle with showing/dealing with emotions without making her appear cold?
How do you make a character strong-willed without being pushy and forceful?
Can too much action appear in a story? How much has to be necessary filler?
Am I ever going to get ‘Cobrastyle’ out of my head?